tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post4815959180848314155..comments2023-09-08T07:02:38.698-07:00Comments on Creative Journey: Like a RiverJBinford-Bellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14293248281473648182noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-55496988477898493272012-01-10T06:10:08.485-08:002012-01-10T06:10:08.485-08:00So true... I haven't noticed that before, but ...So true... I haven't noticed that before, but you made me realize how much life reminds me of a river.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-49428202377108840902012-01-03T16:03:54.949-08:002012-01-03T16:03:54.949-08:00I really like this, I like the way you have chosen...I really like this, I like the way you have chosen to group your images, and the natural extension from one set to the next. The only thing I might change, would be to turn the "or" in the final line of each stanza into an "and" - which continues the narrative, instead of interrupting it, in a more unbroken and flowing fashion correlative to your theme and image of the river. But that's a very minor thing and could very easily simply be a stylistic preference. ;o) Here's my offering this week: http://caridwen.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/drafting-the-clock-strikes-inspiration/ happy rally!Melissa Ridley Elmeshttp://caridwen.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/drafting-the-clock-strikes-inspiration/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-76849871698326870582012-01-02T18:33:24.874-08:002012-01-02T18:33:24.874-08:00A poem with beautifully word-painted images and em...A poem with beautifully word-painted images and emotional depth.<br /><br />You are quite skilled in poetry and photography, it seems, as your photo is also wonderful. Good work on both counts.Elaine Danforthhttp://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/years-nadir/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-7577708910623995902011-12-31T18:43:25.108-08:002011-12-31T18:43:25.108-08:00keep your spirits high,
lovely imagery.
Happy New...keep your spirits high,<br /><br />lovely imagery.<br />Happy New Year.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-14740695331822425792011-12-29T20:39:17.660-08:002011-12-29T20:39:17.660-08:00Lovely!
Spirits that can't be dampened.
Alci...Lovely!<br /><br />Spirits that can't be dampened.<br /><br /><a href="http://reigningwanderer.blogspot.com/2011/12/breathless.html" rel="nofollow">Alcina-Breathless</a>Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-25660888276423603922011-12-29T09:17:12.272-08:002011-12-29T09:17:12.272-08:00Lovely, flowing verses - though I was quite distra...Lovely, flowing verses - though I was quite distracted by admiration of your paintings. As an enamel artist I drooled over the rich colours, particularly the oranges - they are so difficult in fused glass.Harry Nicholsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16801422418560281658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-80882550813325812282011-12-29T00:38:20.767-08:002011-12-29T00:38:20.767-08:00Well done, a lovely poem that moves me.Well done, a lovely poem that moves me.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-78635939524456449902011-12-28T21:47:42.847-08:002011-12-28T21:47:42.847-08:00LOVE this, Jacqui ... from start to finish!! The p...LOVE this, Jacqui ... from start to finish!! The photography is beautiful as well!<br /><br />Thank you for sharing! Happy New Year!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-91025585101081442182011-12-28T16:30:28.510-08:002011-12-28T16:30:28.510-08:00moving words, wow.
well done.moving words, wow.<br /><br /><br />well done.The Orange Treehttp://cooloceanwaves.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-21648033393915400472011-12-28T16:24:59.957-08:002011-12-28T16:24:59.957-08:00Being a tributary, I join you in expectation of th...Being a tributary, I join you in expectation of the sea.booguloohttp://booguloo.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-15747967521645327302011-12-28T16:14:08.583-08:002011-12-28T16:14:08.583-08:00Vivid piece...flow on poet...flow on.Vivid piece...flow on poet...flow on.Dasuntouchahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07702658573117359403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-67594307052694529932011-12-27T15:44:13.371-08:002011-12-27T15:44:13.371-08:00beautiful word flow.
wow.beautiful word flow.<br /><br />wow.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-64801892448640384482011-12-26T17:36:20.847-08:002011-12-26T17:36:20.847-08:00water, the pic, some of the metaphors blended in, ...water, the pic, some of the metaphors blended in, so interesting! :)<br />happy gooseberry day!!<br />http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/21/les-miettes-dun-passe/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-55865262750459293732011-12-26T16:23:30.112-08:002011-12-26T16:23:30.112-08:00we are heading somewhere... and it's all at di...we are heading somewhere... and it's all at different currents at different times...<br /><br />lovely poem... very touching!<br /><br />~L~Lhttp://www.untitledmoments.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-41002619904605047302011-12-26T12:46:44.905-08:002011-12-26T12:46:44.905-08:00A beautiful poem, Jacqui. The most profound statem...A beautiful poem, Jacqui. The most profound statement on the post, however: "And sometimes what you get is better than what you had planned." So true! <br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/the-best-christmas-ever/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/the-best-christmas-ever/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-55347018610540496532011-12-26T10:07:32.202-08:002011-12-26T10:07:32.202-08:00oh, love it.
Happy Holidays.oh, love it.<br /><br />Happy Holidays.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-44167648993009997932011-12-26T07:09:54.844-08:002011-12-26T07:09:54.844-08:00Amazing Analogy! Beautiful words!Amazing Analogy! Beautiful words!LifeInVersehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06301342527864743678noreply@blogger.com