tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post7135977187610180403..comments2023-09-08T07:02:38.698-07:00Comments on Creative Journey: Rain - Mag 304JBinford-Bellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14293248281473648182noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-75212891009883556102016-02-02T08:03:48.079-08:002016-02-02T08:03:48.079-08:00The restrained use of rhyme really adds to this po...The restrained use of rhyme really adds to this poem. Enjoyed it.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-56818128886833456162016-02-01T17:44:48.245-08:002016-02-01T17:44:48.245-08:00succinct capture of this image.succinct capture of this image.Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-68487319252250295232016-02-01T14:44:24.958-08:002016-02-01T14:44:24.958-08:00Love the last stanza!Love the last stanza!C. Sandlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15616902831506982429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-70211620199470051482016-02-01T11:58:11.475-08:002016-02-01T11:58:11.475-08:00Poor thing. Poor thing. Helen Killeen Bauch McHarguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07042488205276127209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-47180858926987970202016-02-01T02:29:36.867-08:002016-02-01T02:29:36.867-08:00You did very well with the prompt; your take is lo...You did very well with the prompt; your take is lovelyKathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-29752202243104735002016-01-31T21:54:09.796-08:002016-01-31T21:54:09.796-08:00Melting sky into the street--I like that!Melting sky into the street--I like that!Maria Mainerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12839883252262642051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-11060628133844691732016-01-31T13:30:48.386-08:002016-01-31T13:30:48.386-08:00melting sky...so nice!melting sky...so nice!Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15053707892868584990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-79092500607149609672016-01-31T12:26:25.829-08:002016-01-31T12:26:25.829-08:00I think this is so much of a story told in so very...I think this is so much of a story told in so very few words.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-32793878323970978822016-01-31T10:49:05.157-08:002016-01-31T10:49:05.157-08:00Oh wow. The last two stanzas are powerful.Oh wow. The last two stanzas are powerful.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-215361193358741510.post-81666711889419664772016-01-31T10:13:02.598-08:002016-01-31T10:13:02.598-08:00Very nice form and wording.Very nice form and wording.humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.com