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Just a little trip
You know I never lie
Come away with me
down the rabbit hole.
Trip the light
of wonderland
Just a tiny trip
to a land of nonsense.
You know you want to
escape this reality
trip among the stars
with Tweedle Dumb and Dee.
Take this magic pill
and come away with me
a short walk along the briny sea
with me and the Carpenter.
J. Binford-Bell
June 2014
Oh, yes! Let's go! *smile* Very nice write!
ReplyDeleteYou've made it sound quite tempting ............
ReplyDeleteOh Alice! and your silly rabbit!
ReplyDeleteNice literary tone and intriguing ending
ReplyDeleteAlice in Wonderland used to enchant me when I was little - thank you for the reminder! Lovely poem - naughty pills!
ReplyDeleteYou make it sound enchanting and convincing. Escape along that briny sea. I like it.. the poem, I mean.
ReplyDelete'down the rabbit hole.' i think at some point in life, well all dream of being alice down the rabbit hole! great work!
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http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/
Fantastic. I'm sure I saw Alice reaching for your pill...
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeleteI love the Alice connection, cleverly constructed, a very nice poem.
ReplyDeleteCharming! And don't forget the cat...
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