Wednesday, December 29, 2010

Mag 46 - Tossed aside


Tossed Aside

The once beloved
Desired
The soft kid gloves he'd given her
Tossed Aside
Dropped
Upon the hard wood floor
Like he had dropped her.

J. Binford-Bell 2010

12 comments:

  1. Wow, your words are wonderful Short and to the point..."like he dropped her". I like this.

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  2. Thoughtful, succinct and well worded.

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  3. well done...especially like the line "dropped upon the hard wood floor"

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  4. Wow, I feel the harsh emotion in your writing ... very nice.

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  5. sad,
    dropped like rain,
    I see the pain....

    lovely tale.

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  6. Painful but a great take o the mag

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