Monday, October 24, 2011

Raven Watch


Raven Watch

Praying high
Bowed on ancient tower
Head to rising sun
Listening to old spirits
As he meditates.

Raven with head bowed
Deep in his own thoughts
Unaware of the others
Preening sleek feathers
As the sun rises.

Raven stays
Safe on the wall of stones
Laid by ancient hands
High above the mesa floor
Gathering energy to soar.

Dance
Rise on the wind
Soar uncaring
Of the world below
Raven fly over the red cliffs.

Jacqui Binford-Bell
October 2011




Oh, such a surprise!
Recognition for words penned
When mother said I could not write
Right.

Thank you to the Poetry Palace

I nominate Peter

7 comments:

  1. This is beautifully written ... it gives me a sense of serenity!

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  2. love it,

    the imagery is simply mind blowing.

    :)

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  3. ode to the Raven,

    hoe presice and lovely your words are on it. a job well done,

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  4. Very well done and congratulations on your award - well deserved.

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  5. well deserved award.

    how mind blowing your entry is, I am impressed.

    please come again tomorrow, for another round of week 55 fun.

    if you share early, you get more feedback.

    you could link in this one, or another free verse.

    you rock, loved your support.

    :)

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  6. Your poem is both earth and spiritual at the same time. Feels like you are tapping into something ancient and wise.

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I appreciate all kind comments on my art and poetry.