Creative Journey: We are watching you

Sunday, March 4, 2012

Image by Sorolta Ban and provided by Magpie Tales

Once

we were asleep

but we woke

and we are watching you.

Now

be afraid

watch your every step

the eyes watch.

J. Binford-Bell

March 2012

Brian MillerMarch 4, 2012 at 3:26 PM
eep...you know they are really watching us...and that is scary...
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WanderMarch 4, 2012 at 9:31 PM
Good poem...I like it so far it is the first "horror" poem of the prompt

Wander
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WanderMarch 4, 2012 at 9:32 PM
Thanks for it by the way
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JinksyMarch 5, 2012 at 1:28 PM
Be afraid - be very afraid ...oo err!
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AnonymousMarch 5, 2012 at 2:04 PM
As I read this, I couldn't help but think of the book "1984" by George Orwell, where "Big Brother" is always watching.

Great take on this prompt.

-Mara
http://the-poetic-madame.blogspot.com
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Susan AndersonMarch 5, 2012 at 4:41 PM
creepy

*shiver*

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Tess KincaidMarch 6, 2012 at 9:00 AM
Ooo...scary...
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Tumblewords:March 6, 2012 at 7:54 PM
It's like 'big sister'. Nicely done!
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TrellissimoMarch 7, 2012 at 11:51 AM
A touch of Big Brother and 1984...
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I appreciate all kind comments on my art and poetry.