Sunday, January 31, 2016

Rain - Mag 304

Rooftops Manchester by Adolphe Valette
Visual prompt provided by Magpie Tales
Rain

Rain
again
like tears
never ending.

Soot
rolled 
with the rain
down the panes.

Tears
streaked
mascara
from her eyes.

Her
heart
dropping
to her feet.

Melting
sky
into
street.


J. Binford-Bell
January 2016



10 comments:

  1. Oh wow. The last two stanzas are powerful.

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  2. I think this is so much of a story told in so very few words.

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  3. Melting sky into the street--I like that!

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  4. You did very well with the prompt; your take is lovely

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  5. succinct capture of this image.

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  6. The restrained use of rhyme really adds to this poem. Enjoyed it.

    =)

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