Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Mag 54 - Upset


Upset

She thought she had
All the pieces fitted together
When fate bumped
The board.

J.Binford-Bell
February 2011

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16 comments:

  1. Why oh why can't we keep those boards steady?

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  2. How true, fate does indeed bump that board! Nice magpie :)

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  3. Wow, this is great. You can have all your pieces in place but then ..life strides by. http://judyidliketosay.blogspot.com/

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  4. And when that board gets a bump, it can take a while to straighten things out again.

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  5. None of us know what's in store, a good and bad thing in ways, but more good. Enjoyed your take on the prompt.

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  6. That's life, though. It's rarely fair to any of us.

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  7. Guess we all get those knocks from time to time...

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  8. Outstanding! I really like this!

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  9. There's nothing worse than fate bumping the board. And it usually happens when you've nearly finished - never when you've just begun.

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  10. True, but no less brilliant for that. I ducked this one. Your makes me feel chicken.

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  11. things happen other way around..
    lovely and thought provoking.

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    thanks for the time.
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