Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Mag 54 - Upset


Upset

She thought she had
All the pieces fitted together
When fate bumped
The board.

J.Binford-Bell
February 2011

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16 comments:

  1. HelenFebruary 22, 2011 at 8:58 AM

    Why oh why can't we keep those boards steady?

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  2. Kristen HaskellFebruary 22, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    How true, fate does indeed bump that board! Nice magpie :)

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  3. Judy RoneyFebruary 22, 2011 at 11:51 AM

    Wow, this is great. You can have all your pieces in place but then ..life strides by. http://judyidliketosay.blogspot.com/

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  4. MartinFebruary 22, 2011 at 12:58 PM

    And when that board gets a bump, it can take a while to straighten things out again.

    Poetry24…where news is the Muse

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  5. Tumblewords:February 22, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    So true - nicely done!

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  6. The Blog of BeeFebruary 22, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    Damn fate! Nice.

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  7. LouiseFebruary 23, 2011 at 5:00 AM

    None of us know what's in store, a good and bad thing in ways, but more good. Enjoyed your take on the prompt.

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  8. Doctor FTSEFebruary 23, 2011 at 11:52 AM

    That's life, though. It's rarely fair to any of us.

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  9. TrellissimoFebruary 24, 2011 at 4:01 AM

    Guess we all get those knocks from time to time...

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  10. Tess KincaidFebruary 24, 2011 at 10:37 AM

    That pesky fate.

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  11. heatherbelleFebruary 24, 2011 at 9:15 PM

    Indeed..

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  12. Other MaryFebruary 25, 2011 at 8:29 AM

    Outstanding! I really like this!

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  13. Sue JFebruary 27, 2011 at 3:36 PM

    There's nothing worse than fate bumping the board. And it usually happens when you've nearly finished - never when you've just begun.

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  14. Dave KingMarch 2, 2011 at 2:03 AM

    True, but no less brilliant for that. I ducked this one. Your makes me feel chicken.

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  15. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceMarch 2, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    things happen other way around..
    lovely and thought provoking.

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  16. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceMarch 2, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    welcome join poets rally week 39, share a free or old random poem, make new poetic friends, have your work fully represented by the end of the rally..


    thanks for the time.
    Happy Writing.
    Hope to see you in.
    xoxox

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