Sunday, June 1, 2014

Let's Take a Trip

Lips supplied by The Mag 122


Just a little trip
You know I never lie
Come away with me
down the rabbit hole.

Trip the light
of wonderland
Just a tiny trip
to a land of nonsense.

You know you want to
escape this reality
trip among the stars
with Tweedle Dumb and Dee.

Take this magic pill
and come away with me
a short walk along the briny sea
with me and the Carpenter. 

J. Binford-Bell
June 2014

11 comments:

  1. Oh, yes! Let's go! *smile* Very nice write!

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  2. You've made it sound quite tempting ............

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  3. Oh Alice! and your silly rabbit!

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  4. Nice literary tone and intriguing ending

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  5. Alice in Wonderland used to enchant me when I was little - thank you for the reminder! Lovely poem - naughty pills!

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  6. You make it sound enchanting and convincing. Escape along that briny sea. I like it.. the poem, I mean.

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  7. 'down the rabbit hole.' i think at some point in life, well all dream of being alice down the rabbit hole! great work!

    stacy lynn mar
    http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/

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  8. Fantastic. I'm sure I saw Alice reaching for your pill...

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  9. I love the Alice connection, cleverly constructed, a very nice poem.

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  10. Charming! And don't forget the cat...

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